Chabouté: To Build a Fire

Christophe Chabouté, Gallery 13 (2018)

4 thoughts on “Chabouté: To Build a Fire

  1. Very interesting post, Diana. I’ve read a few Jack London novels but not this one. The choice of a second-person narrative is innovative, and I can see how it works in the illustration you posted, where we seem to be looking down on our own hands instead of seeing the man from the outside. So perhaps the intention was to put the reader more closely in the story, to make it feel as if “you” are the man warming his hands by the fire. Were all the illustrations done from this perspective?

    From what I know of Jack London’s other work, though, I think he was pretty good at making the reader feel involved in his tales, even without addressing them directly and drawing pictures from their point of view, so I can see why the original might have worked better in this case. But it was interesting to read about it!

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    1. Thanks, and you hit the nail on the head. Establishing connection with readers should be one of second-person narrative’s main goals. I still think it works best as a sympathy-inducing, connection-building device when a character is thrust into some hardship or situation involuntarily or not of their own accord. This is not quite the case in London’s story. I found this narration more distracting than sympathy-inducing in this graphic story, especially when London’s original story doesn’t employ it. But, again, I am not a man or an adventurer, and it may appeal more to other readers. And, then again, the second-person narration in this graphic novel is even odder when you consider that this story’s morale is NOT to be like the main character – he is presented as a person whose actions we shouldn’t be following…so, I don’t see how us associating with the character should be one of the priorities.

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